My first forza horizon 3 video- feedback appreciated

Hey guys, Ray here
Today I thought I would shamelessly plug my youtube channel, and what better place to do it then here!? Of course, this is not for monetary gain- Monstercat has claimed my video (all my videos). I am in desperate need of some feedback. This was recorded entirely using xbox game dvr, as I do not have a capture card (quality could do better). It was somewhat painful to record it, and I wish I could have done it on my PC but that is not a possibility with the poor optimisation. Anyways, here is my video!