Tell me what you all think. Goodwood 2013 Film (1st Draft)

Been trying to work on this film off and on since I came back from the Goodwood Festival of Speed last year. This is the first edit of the film. Still a lot to do but I figured getting an opinion of what other people (petrol heads mainly) think about what I have put together so far. Please feel free to give me advice on what needs to be fixed. Just don’t be rude.