fuel would be a good edition to horizon but the physics would have to be good. EX. for super cars u would have to stop more than if u where in a fiesta and convertibles should be easy to use and must be fast for those rainy moments.
I didn’t understand the entire post. Here are the points that I didn’t understand:
- A fuel “edition” would make no sense. “Addition” is the better word.
- By using “where”, I thought that you were decribing a place. “Were” is the better word.
- At first, I thought that when you mentioned “a fiesta”, I thought that it would be a party. Use “a Fiesta” instead.
- When you said that “convertibles should be easy to use”, I thought that you were talking about convertibles in general.
- Also, when you said that they (the convertibles) must be fast for those rainy moments, I thought that you were saying that the car should be fast.
- The transition from one idea (fuel, in this case) to the next (convertible tops) was unsatisfactory to me. In my opinion, the good structure for that post is to use two sentences, with one each to describe your ideas.
The wishlist thread is stickied on this subforum. Post your ideas there, instead of creating a new topic.
I am not trying to criticise you. I was just trying to help that post be better.